Exercise in show don´t tell!

What is happening with me? Right now I have contact with every muscle and bone in my body. In detail and all of them at the same time. A second ago the air around me was lukewarm and stuffy. Now it is clean and cool. It goes all the way into my toes and fingertips. Someone opened the throttle. Removed the body-sized condom that usually exist between me and the world.

This is beyond understanding. I rest without thoughts in what is. What happened just before was I retained the scary noise I sometimes give away. It has happened a few times in situations like the recent one. This time I took some deep breaths and…

2 Replies to “Exercise in show don´t tell!”

  1. I attend a course in novel writing. Our task was to take a strong feeling and put words to it remembering “show don´t tell”- principle. I think I did hit it hard. I am happy and proud. Thanks for you comment

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