You told me something
Warmth and happiness showed up
Thoughts whirled around upstairs.
Did forget what you said
Received the undertone you gave
Will remember the event
until dementia sweeps my attic clean.

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You told me something
Warmth and happiness showed up
Thoughts whirled around upstairs.
Did forget what you said
Received the undertone you gave
Will remember the event
until dementia sweeps my attic clean.
Dear Göran, very happy to see your poem come up in the WordPress feed… I love the poem… feels like sunlight on deep, melancholy undercurrents…. nostalgia, longing, resignation, past and future combined in the present moment…. It has beautiful rhythm as well; this poem serves us well. I was inspired by it.
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Thank you very much Nadine. It warms my heart that there are individuals around the word liking my poetry.
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Nice poem, speaks to what many of us feel. Dr. Bob
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Thank you, Dr Bob
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